Since this is an edit I won't write another critique. I'll just comment here.
the deeper colour in the jacket does give me a feel of the time but you aren't there quite yet! Much closer than before though. the thing about her location is that the lighting is complex. That looks like Tokyo square. so there will be lighting from billboards, cars and whatnot casting shadows on her and making the artwork more complex. The effort that went into the background is truly commendable. I would've just used a picture of Tokyo for the background, blurred it and added a filter.
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